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Post by The Admin Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:25 pm

Ok... Im stupid for doing this... it will just end like all the other stories...but maybe not...
I will focus and hope for the latter.

Ok this is L-Brainery's Purim Story version 1.0.0.0!
choose a character by going under your profile go to the tab Lbrainery stats and choose a character under the purim character slecetion

after you choose a character post in a spoiler who you chose this way others see and know who they can choose because -YOU CAN NOT PLAY ANOTHER PERSONS CHARACTER UNLESS THEY GIVE HIM UP!

once all players are taken and all spoilers posted we can begin!
but first some rules:

narrator:

anyone, even someone without a character may play the narrator. The narrator MUST move the story forward!! That is his point. And if someone messes up in his character the narrator can try and fix it by making sure he gets the character on track. when you post as narrator make sure subject is "Narrator".

Characters:
ok I hope you know the story?? otherwise just watch the game rather than play...
okay please try to make your character be 'in character' with his real version.

some characters will die... (bigson and seresh, haman and I dunno who else...)
be aware about the person you choose and what will happen with them.
maybe you want a small part? (bigson)
Maybe a big part? (mordechai)

well anyhow when you, post play as third person limited view from your character. you may talk to other characters, but you cant say what they will say back...(this rule may change depending on how quick the post back is...) you will have to wait for them to post back... or post as the narrator as the person to get the story moving....(good way around the problem)

so let this game begin...
rules may change so please keep an eye on this post!!
ok people grab characters!
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Post by shamguy4 Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:30 pm

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Post by The Admin Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:32 pm

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Post by shamguy4 Sun Mar 09, 2008 2:13 pm

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Post by cyberSmashLink Sun Mar 09, 2008 7:52 pm

I'm Bigson!
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Post by The Admin Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:30 pm

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Post by HomerPalooza67 Sun Mar 09, 2008 9:12 pm

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Post by TheLegend Sun Mar 09, 2008 9:26 pm

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Post by TopStinger2007 Mon Mar 10, 2008 1:02 pm

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Post by The Admin Mon Mar 10, 2008 4:10 pm

We dont have enough people and it already looks like its gonna fall through... whatever start if you want...
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Post by shamguy4 Mon Mar 10, 2008 4:14 pm

well then I will start with the narrator...

.....And it was in the days of Achashveirosh!! Ruler of 127 er.. medinas from somewhere to kush!!
And he decided to plan a party...
But he wasnt really the one behind the party....

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Post by shamguy4 Mon Mar 10, 2008 4:25 pm

He stood at the side watching with his eyes fixed upon what was to be a feast of a feast. The greatest feast, a party for all to come. But who would come that was the question?

There was one group he had hope would show. The only group he cared for. Or was it that he didnt care for?
It was the jews that he despised. It was them that he wanted gone forever and for always. But somehow they evaded all problems...But at last the secret to their destruction had been revealed to him. And it seemed he had figured out exactly how....
But it would take time... Time to make the right move when they would finally fall before his feet it a most beautiful fashion. And so he waited... like he waited now... for a sign... a sign that he could come out of the shadows and reveal himself......as Haman the destroyer of the jews and all they stood for.
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Post by cyberSmashLink Mon Mar 10, 2008 5:54 pm

the sighn was when the king, Achasverosh would be assainated by his two henchmen, cleverly disguised as royal gaurds. The king had to be killed because he was always interfearing in his plans to kill the jews. with the king out of they way everything could procede as planned, and if he was lucky he could turn the jews into a scape goat.
Hamman looked around and saw a Jewish father and son causing trouble by eating all the food in front of Achashverosh. They could Ruin the plan! Haman then went closer to them to let them have it...Oh wait it was just His two trouble making royal gaurds.
The cunning Seresh was accompanyed by his "Big son" who's name was Bigson. The only way to describe Bigson is to say that he was really really fat. In fact As a child he won the sumo wresting world cup! Now at the age of 31, he has quadripilled in size, and stupidity. His father was the brains behind him. Without Seresh ,Bigson would be nothing.
"how stupid are they, They are going to ruin My plan to get back at the jews, Hamman thought.
Hamman then approached them in a rage of anger and tapped on Bigsons back. Bigson didn't feel a thing. Seresh then noticed this and mocked Hamman by saying that he punches like a girl. the now furious Haman gave few very hard punches to get Bigsons attention. Bigson turned around to a sweaty Hamman and said with with a mouth full of food, "Wwheelll elllloooo there aaammmaan. greaat fooooood!" food splatered all over Hamman's clothing. Hamman then started to yell at Bigson by yelling the following...

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Post by Brick Tamland Mon Mar 10, 2008 10:00 pm

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Post by The Admin Mon Mar 10, 2008 10:29 pm

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Post by The Admin Mon Mar 10, 2008 10:52 pm

The mirror only showed Truth... Yes beauty beamed back at her from head to toe. Vashti grinned at her looks as she began to admire herself. But something interrupted her fun... It was that jewish maidservant.... There in the backround in the mirror she could see the young jew rolling her eyes. Instantly she began to fume... She turned on her heals and stared at the young disgusting thing!! But as fast as her mouth opened it closed....
She would not just yell at the brat!! That would be no fun!!
Instead she smiled at the jew and recieved a smile back. knowing full and well the smile she recieved was a false one full of hate. But it didnt matter... what she had planned for the brat would leech any bit of happiness left out of her... when she was done, she wouldnt even be able to smile a false smle ever again...
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Post by cyberSmashLink Mon Mar 10, 2008 11:15 pm

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Can we go from one character to another EX: Hypotheticy can I write my side of the story as Vashti's story is going on even though they may have nothing to do with each other? (by saying Meanwhile)
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Post by shamguy4 Tue Mar 11, 2008 12:47 pm

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Post by shamguy4 Tue Mar 11, 2008 3:04 pm

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Post by cyberSmashLink Tue Mar 11, 2008 8:43 pm

“I’ve done it!” thought Bigson to himself.
Bigson had just captured his 100th Midena from Achashverosh. Now Achashverosh only had 127 medinas left.
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Bigson has served for Oievregel’s army for 3 years. During this time Bigson rose in ranks was the general of Oievregel’s army and Oievregel’s most loyal servant. Oievregel was Achashverosh younger sister. She wanted to share the kingdom with him. Naturally Achashverosh refused to share being the older brother he was. The solution: take the kingdom from him.
She called for Bigson.
“I have a special job for you. I want you to be a spy for me and go to Achashverosh’s party next week. He is supposed to be marrying Vashti then. You know my nephew Hamman…he will meet you there. I want you to dispose the king. This calamity will cause panic and we will finally be able to take over the Achashverosh Empire! Buah ha ha!”
“Yes master,” Bigson then let out a loud battle cry
YYY
AAA
RRR
GGG
!

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The two of them laughed together for several moments and then Bigson left to prepare to go on his week long journey to the big party. He looked on the mirror as he was putting in his battle armor. He saw a really fat figure on the reflection. As a kid Bigson would compete in the sumo world cup. He won 5 years in a row. It was amazing that he would even be able to make the journey. Bigson then left to go on his journey.

A week later Bigson arrived at the party. He sent his sign/signal to Hamman. Together they would conquer and dominate for their beloved ruler Oievregel.
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Post by shamguy4 Wed Mar 12, 2008 12:05 pm

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Post by RoaringTiger Wed Mar 12, 2008 12:28 pm

how is it that evry possible story that everyone continues gets ruined somehow
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Post by shamguy4 Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:26 pm

He stared at all the guests who seemed to pile in pretty quickly. It seemed all was going well except there was not a jew in site.
This was a bit dissapointing, because he had made the party for the jews. He had planted the thought very carefully in the kings head...
he looked around at the tables and watched as people laughed and soffed at one another. Some tables had many people others seemed fairly empty. Too empty....
He sighed. Would any jews show up? Would his plan even begin?? But as a boy he had learned patience... and he conitinued wating....
As he stood watching the scenery far off in the corner there was a servant waving his hand about. He would not have taken any notice, but the fact that it looked like he ws waving at him made him feel uneasy. He squinted in the servants direction and saw who it was, and rolled his eyes...
The stupid oaf bigson... he seemed to be waving as if calling to him... But what could he possibly want?? Whatever it was Haman wanted to be no part of it... he had his own problems to deal with and servant issues were not going to join them...
So Haman just snorted and turned away...


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