The game that cant be messed up... I think....
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The game that cant be messed up... I think....
Ok.... for this story you can only post ONE sentence at a time..... this way you cant right any garbage.....
and if you're not a good writer... well how bad could one sentence be.....
maybe I will add more sentences if the story doesnt go awry...
This is good because it will cause you to think... try to write a really good sentence!!!!
ok I will start....
Max stared out his window at the sky above him which seemed to darken slowly as night came over the world.
and if you're not a good writer... well how bad could one sentence be.....
maybe I will add more sentences if the story doesnt go awry...
This is good because it will cause you to think... try to write a really good sentence!!!!
ok I will start....
Max stared out his window at the sky above him which seemed to darken slowly as night came over the world.
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Then, he realized with horror that it could not possibly be night; it was 2 o'clock in the afternoon!
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the runon sentance
However Max realized that he forgot to change the time to A.M., and then pondered , why is it getting dark at 2 A.M. and then saw in the distance a huge identifed flying object (IFO ) which he then identified as a UFO with super bright lights flashing on and off which gave the appearance of the sky looking as if it was switching between night and day .
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- Hope you don't mind my run on sentance and emicons.
Shamguy or jonquil: if you want me to delete this let me know.
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As the UFO pass over Max, he heard the blast of a shotgun, saw the UFO pierced by a cloud of shot, watched the UFO fall to the ground, and heard a middle-aged man pronounce with a Southern accent, "I bagged myself an Alien!"
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Max wondered if anyone else in the class had seen or heard anything, so he looked around, and to his amazement, everyone was fast asleep, including the teacher.
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Re: The game that cant be messed up... I think....
And then Max suffered a complete and total existence failure.
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But then God remebred Max..... Adn Max found favor in his eyes...... And God blew into Max's nostrils, bringing him back to life!!!!!
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Re: The game that cant be messed up... I think....
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- I didn't write that he died. I wrote that his existence failed - i.e. all of a sudden, he ceased to exist. He didn't die, just merely stopped existing.
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and then a man named homerpalooza walked in and patted max on the back asking "are you allright because for a second I thought that you ceased to exist" the Ceased to exist virus then spread to homerpalooza....and i guess you(the reader) knows what happened next.
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- Sorry for having more than one sentance
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Unnacceptable cybersmash!!!!!!!!!!
well this story seems to have gone awry already so no I dont care....
In fact, Max went and jumped in a lake and tried drowning himself because he hated his life.... And why shouldnt he?
When idiots make up that he: almost got hit by a car, had a deranged friend named Ron, ....Im not really sure whose girlfriend Diane was or what freakin story she is from!... But she is there to add more havoc and reasoning for Max's suicide....
And then Dan jumped in after him to find that the writer decided to take the water away, causing Dan to fall to his death.......
Max was at the bottom of the lake already so..... he found himself on the ground breathing again!...
"Darn!" Max thought...
well this story seems to have gone awry already so no I dont care....
In fact, Max went and jumped in a lake and tried drowning himself because he hated his life.... And why shouldnt he?
When idiots make up that he: almost got hit by a car, had a deranged friend named Ron, ....Im not really sure whose girlfriend Diane was or what freakin story she is from!... But she is there to add more havoc and reasoning for Max's suicide....
And then Dan jumped in after him to find that the writer decided to take the water away, causing Dan to fall to his death.......
Max was at the bottom of the lake already so..... he found himself on the ground breathing again!...
"Darn!" Max thought...
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how did this story het ruined?
And then Max wanted to hang himself but he couldn't find any rope and he was upset but he thought of another idea why not drink poison but there was no more poison in the house and G-d remembered Max and let max find some rubbing alcohol
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Re: The game that cant be messed up... I think....
And then Seth, who now dated Diane, who broke up with Dan, who was too busy to notice that she left him because he was playing battlefield 3 with Ron who hated seth, went and threw a knife at Max....
In short Seth threw a knife at Max.....
In short Seth threw a knife at Max.....
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- HeHe....Lol I dont even know how your story really goes... I just know there were soooo many characters....
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who was totally drunk at the time.
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And so the knife plunged into Max who roared in pain!
Blood poured out and he felt himself deflating.... Soon he would be no more...
"Sweeeeet!" said peter Griffin who arrived just in time to save the day!!!...
Blood poured out and he felt himself deflating.... Soon he would be no more...
"Sweeeeet!" said peter Griffin who arrived just in time to save the day!!!...
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But then Chris griffin came with spongebob to see max die but then Jason came with the police who robbed the 99 cents store and they healed max back to life but then ron's half sister who was actually his mother in law who half sister was Diane came and killed max who was her brother' son
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or so he thought
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Re: The game that cant be messed up... I think....
... and then there was Brick.
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Re: The game that cant be messed up... I think....
I'm Brick Tamland. People seem to like me because I am polite and I am rarely late. I like to eat ice cream and I really enjoy a nice pair of slacks. Years later, a doctor will tell me that I have an I.Q. of 48 and am what some people call mentally retarded.
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Excuse me, people. I'M Brick Tamland. People seem to like ME because I am polite and I am rarely late. I like to eat ice cream and I really enjoy a nice pair of slacks. Years later, a doctor will tell me that I have an I.Q. of 48 and am what some people call mentally retarded.
Not Mr. RoaringTiger.
All we know about him is that he likes Scrubs.
Not Mr. RoaringTiger.
All we know about him is that he likes Scrubs.
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hes right scrubs is awesome
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Re: The game that cant be messed up... I think....
We know (or I know) quite a bit more than that. First of all, he's about 5'7" -5'9", he likes to think poery during class (he never tried writing it, not after that first time ) His favorite sports team is Scrubs, his favorite food is Scrubs, and his favorite hair gel is Pantene Pro (the truth hurts, lol).
He has brown hair (or is it black? Blond? Red? These things are sooo hard to remember)
He likes Corvettes and Ferrari's, becuase EVERYONE likes corvettes and ferrari's, and he eats Meal Plan for lunch.
He has brown hair (or is it black? Blond? Red? These things are sooo hard to remember)
He likes Corvettes and Ferrari's, becuase EVERYONE likes corvettes and ferrari's, and he eats Meal Plan for lunch.
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you could have been describing the admin, for all i know, that describes most of the ned Ned flanders school for kids who can't read good and want to learn to do other things good too! i mean Ned flanders! (sorry) and the fact that the picture says scrubs on it shows that he likes scrubs! i mean your quote is from douglas adams! who is he, some philosopher? i've never heard of him, but you seem to like him! there! now i know all about you!
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...well the story is totally messed up!!! we are going off topic!!! what happened to Max!!!!
Forget about Brick.... lets talk Max!!!!
Forget about Brick.... lets talk Max!!!!
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chad gadya, ah ah! chad gadya, ah ah! The End!
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"And now the rest of the story."
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