Novel # 4 Zack's world

by RoaringTiger Mon Feb 25, 2008 4:47 pm

Hey everyone not to sound repetitve but here comes another story where everyone fills out part of the story.
Please don't add many characters otherwise the story will be hard to follow. Also do not add many plots and themes otherwise the reader will lose interest.
Thanx have fun
Lets begin:

Zack was nervous as anything as he was standing under the alter. He and his now new wife, Brenda are about to be named husband and wife. After they were pronounced Husbad and wife they started dancing. This was the happiest day of Zack's life. All of his friends were there and he was just so happy. Nothing would ruin this day. After an hour of dancing, Brenda started feeling ill. She stopped dancing for awhile. Zack was concerned but but he wasn't so worried for he thought it was just her dancing too much. All of the sudden she started vomitting constantly. Zack was now worried about her. All of the suddenshe passed out. Zack was on the verge of crying after seeing his new partner in life just pass out. Everyone at the wedding was worried. Brenda's father immediately called the paramedics. When the paramedics came in Zack saw a familiar face.